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For mommybird's Winter Challenge

Harry Potter. Harry/Neville PG

December Afternoon

edited to add link to revised version.

"Harry? It's cold outside."

"Is it?" He turned to face Neville, but there was nothing in his eyes. He didn't seem to see him at all. "Funny, that."

"Yeah. It being December and all, and us in Scotland." He wrapped the cloak he brought around Harry's shoulders. Harry didn't notice that, or that Neville never did take his hands away. "Maybe you should come in."

Harry shrugged. "It doesn't matter. Not like this is going to hurt me now, is it? I have a *destiny*, don't I? Kill or be killed, or maybe both? So I'm not going to die of pneumonia or anything."

His shoulders were bony under the cloak and the school robe. Neville had watched him not eat for months, much as he'd watched him just stand outside the castle for months. Harry was only alive on the Quidditch pitch these days, or when he taught the DA.

"How do you know that?" Harry frowned but didn't say anything. "How do you know that you can't be hurt? Destiny's a funny thing, Harry. I mean, from what you said, it was almost me who could be killing Vol…Vol…Voldemort. Prophecy works as well for the two of us, except he chose you. Not that I envy you the choosing, but. It's like I'm a spare, you know? And, I'd take it from you if I could, even if the thought gives me nightmares."

"That's what he called Cedric." His voice was so low, Neville could hardly hear it. "He said, 'Kill the spare' and he killed him. His voice is so cold. Colder than this, than this snow." He looked up, and this time Neville knew he saw him. "But you are not a spare, Neville. You're too brave for that. I…I blunder into things without thinking, which is not bravery, but you go in with those eyes wide open. You're a true Gryffindor." He pulled the cloak closer around his body, as if finally feeling the wind cut through him.

"That's not bravery. It's just doing what has to be done." Neville smiled. "But you'll do it, Harry, and you'll survive. And if I can help in anyway, I will. It doesn't matter what happens to me."

Harry looked at him. His eyes were very green behind his glasses. "Yes, it does. It does more than anything I could say." He bit his lower lip for a moment, and then let it go. His mouth was very red.

Neville's heart turned over. He leaned forward, his hands still on Harry's shoulders, and wondering just when he'd gotten taller, kissed him on that mouth. Harry did nothing at first, but then his lips softened and moved and they wrapped their arms around each other, and suddenly it was warm in the middle of the snow of a Scottish December.

And Harry let Neville lead him back inside and to a Room of Requirement that held only a large, soft bed.

I suppose I shoulda known...

... but this was my first HP fic and I just didn't picture the two of them walking to a bed. Great writing (Harry as DA teacher, smart), and great tone, and I should know what I get into before I get there. }B-)

Re: I suppose I shoulda known...

Y'know. It was a little sudden.

I think maybe I should change the ending to "comfortable chairs and a big fire."

Ooh, how lovely! Neville's da man!!!

He is, indeed.


Niiiiice! Thanks for responding!

Better than working...:)

Seriously, we need more of these pairing.

It's not one that's been overworked, is it? *g*

Not too much, no.


I think it only became viable after Book 5 anyway, and the Snapes and Dracos (okay, I'm writing a Harry/Draco, too) got there first.

But I like the idea of a pairing where the angst comes from the war and maybe their peer group instead of from the pairing itself. HP needs a pairing that's sweet and supportive without, you know, one of them being in prison for twelve years or dying.

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Neville is my hero now. :)