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Harry Potter



Mild kink

Long. (230K)

A photograph Harry takes from Dudley leads him to a discovery about himself and someone else.

Beautiful Boy

Many, many, many thanks to my betas, wolfshark, reginagiraffe and Legion, and more to my britpickers K and Isobel.


Downloading this to my PDA to read later since I am about to fall over on my keyboard.

What I read, I enjoyed.

I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :)

Reading it between naps. Taking some meds that have made me sleepy.

And I am still enjoying it.

Wow, it's long.
I'm really liking what I've read so far, but I think I'll have to wait until later to finish it.

Take your time. :)

I hope you like it.

Pretty! I like!

Thank you!


Wow. I've loved your little short things, but you must have been working on this for ages; it's excellently crafted.

And I really wish Rowling would write this sort of humanity and tenderness into her own books.

Checks back. I started writing this in December...wow. The short things I usually write in less than day, sometimes less than an evening. This is the longest story I've written in years. But it wrote itself in many ways.

And I am so happy you liked it.

Thank you! Hugs.

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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

And thank you for friending me, too.

I enjoyed the story a lot, even though I'm now kind of sleep deprived. ;)


Sorry, Rat. But thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I don't read a lot of HP, and I usually don't read Harry/Draco at all (I think this was the first longer Harry/Draco story I've read), but gave it a try, because I usually like your writing and D/s stories too, and I was surprised to find that I could believe their relationship. I mean, it's not how I think of Canon!Draco, but it was a step removed into a direction I could follow, and make me suspend my usual disbelief about Harry and Draco wanting a romantic relationship with each other.

I'm about a third of the way through, and I'm enjoying it immensely. You have a deft and subtle touch with the sort of mannerisms that round out characters.

Hot damn! That was a seriously good piece of writing.

I know you probably hear it too much, but are you writing any original fiction? And if not, would you consider doing so?

*eyes wide*

Wow. Thank you.


Original fiction? I don't get asked that much, actually. I do have a couple of pieces - two chapters languishing on a harddrive we don't have access to right now and two or three paragraphs on my palm pilot and my computer at work (well hidden there, of course.)

Commenting before I read it - I'm saving it for tomorrow at work (don't tell the boss :))
I am really looking forward to reading this, I've loved your stories for quite a few years now and can't wait...

I hope you're enjoying it. :)

I preface these remarks with the caveat that I suck at feedback because I have a hard time putting my thoughts into words. But I will try.
My first reaction was wow! That was great.
After digesting the story, I can repeat, wow, that was great! It spoke to my love of well written long stories (and to my sekrit D/S [well, not so secret now that I've said something] kink as well)
I loved the length of it - sometimes shorter stories miss characterization or plot points because they are shorter (not yours, but in general) and this was definitely a story that needed the time spent to tell the story.
I also enjoyed the fact that the characters were growing up, but weren't miraculously adults or weren't adult in body, but childish in mind. I think you did a good job showing the growing part.
And the last thing I'm going to mention is your imaginative method of destroying Voldemort. I've never seen that take on the problem before and I think I like it.
So, anyways, yasher kochaych on a great story.
Will there be a sequel? *puppy dog eyes*

Hi there, from a fellow fanfic writer.

I haven't read this story yet... but I do plan to. (I don't read much slash, but when it's good I like it and it sounds like this one is good.)

Basically I found your LJ through a link from one of my online friends as I come from a similar background as you (hope that's OK to mention here) and I write NC-17 (het, at least so far) fics. (I do write other ratings as well.)

Most of what I write is for the anime Hellsing but I am working on a couple of Harry Potter stories also which are Severus/Hermione.

You're welcome to check out my LJ if you want to know more about me and the issues I'm dealing with... thanks and sorry if this is intruding.

Finished reading the story and I loved it.